http://patrese1.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] patrese1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sinderella81 2010-02-11 06:14 am (UTC)

WoW! This is masterful!

How you convey Lionel's madness.

Lex's calm under such a circumstance is breathtaking, yet as soon as they are out of Lionel's reach he immediately reassures Clark with his tenderness and declarations of love.

Clark's immediate words that he was only... decorated and nothing else.

With both Lex's tender ministrations and Clark's need to let be known that nothing "happened" You manage to inject a sense of innocence among the macabre, brilliant!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.


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