Have you Ever ...
Jan. 27th, 2009 06:01 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
... read a fic where the character kept saying things that totally throw you out of the story?
I was reading this Spander last night ... yes, I read other things outside Clex *wink* ... anyway, it had Xander in a dress, which of course totally pulled me in *g* ... but Spike kept saying 'cunny' and 'clitty' and it kept pulling me out of the damn fic!!!
Has anyone ever encountered this in fic? Where something a character does or says pulls you out?